Happy 13th Anniversary to my wonderful husband. A much better writer than me. I wrote the first poem to him, about him, when we met in 1989. What gall! The second poem is my husband's response. Sigh. I'm a lucky woman. This post is dedicated to our daughter.
Angry with the world he was
for spinning, as it might
He could not take it home to bed
to caress her face, or head
to let her hair fall free and untangle
the day's bitter tasks.
Instead, he stood, inside himself
moved objects with quick eyes and
a sharp tongue
His friends would wonder why
such an intelligent man
could not tell
he was spinning and
the world was
still.
- LD
And was he angry with the world?
For spinning as it might
Or was he merely armored with
an artificial spite
He knew that revolution
was central to it all
The earth and moon revolving
like yin and yang curveballs
Electrons orbit nuclei to hold a thing together
clouds swirl in complicated dance
—and we just call it weather
With all that motion going on
It's hard to keep perspective
It's hard to do what one must do;
obey the prime directive
There's a growing need for revolution
problems that beg solving
And one can never seem to tell
if he's revolting or revolving.
-FL

Amazing. Exactly how I pictured your love story would be- totally unique. Love it!!
ReplyDeletelove the poem, will you be posting more? I love to read poetry from other writers
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